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moonlight smiles bright as hawthorn petals
and she spirals loose from her tethers
her fingers whisper, trailing sighs
flowers bloom and die at her feet
her lips rain scarlet
you are loved the sky murmurs
and i cannot help but believe
:iconladybuttoneyes:

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umm so i dont know exactly what these new things are, but i guess the closest description i could give would be to call them random daydreams....?

anyway enjoy

please do not use or reproduce my work without my written permission

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:iconladybuttoneyes:
thanks!

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telling detail. fresh detail. the good writers touch it often. the mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. the bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies. ~bradbury 451
:iconaria-selene:
Very beautiful :)

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"Art is a step from what is obvious and well-known toward what is arcane and concealed."
Kahlil Gibran
:iconladybuttoneyes:
thank you!

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telling detail. fresh detail. the good writers touch it often. the mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. the bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies. ~bradbury 451
:iconaria-selene:
Your welcome :)

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"Art is a step from what is obvious and well-known toward what is arcane and concealed."
Kahlil Gibran
:iconmaelikki:
very good job, though i question you classifying it as prose. you find yourself swaying to the poetry section it seems.

i am also curious, and find that the ambiguity of the last line really completes the poem. i see any of the following options possible. either you believe the fey, or the fey's tendency to believe the sky, or the fey's tendency to love themselves (or be full of themselves depending on the situation)

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O' course it doesn't make sense. Where's the sense in making any?
:iconladybuttoneyes:
i have no idea what it means-- i just wrote it and couldnt explain a thing about it. it's just kind of literary vomit

i stuck it under prose cuz i couldn't fingure out how i wanted to classify it and everything else i have is under general fiction, again i dont know why

glad you like it though! it was fun to write something much shorter than anything else i've written

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telling detail. fresh detail. the good writers touch it often. the mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. the bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies. ~bradbury 451
:iconmaelikki:
yeah, when i noticed it was short, i figured i had time to read it. might hit some of the pw this weekend though.

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O' course it doesn't make sense. Where's the sense in making any?

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