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We are the colour of terror
Of sea foam of sleep
The breeze that rushes from broken lungs
Our voices are a scream a roar
The hiss of sand and water
Our streaming manes and violent hooves
Rushing on and on and on
Falling up curling over in down
To land quivering at your feet
Soft as petals
Safe
:iconladybuttoneyes:

Author's Comments

a pretty common metaphore i know.

for jessica-- thanks for the idea darling, it's finally finished

please do not use or reproduce my work without my writtten permission

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:icondrumless-drummer:
this is a really pretty poem :) to me it captured the idea of being powerful but not using it... the 'gentle giant' concept. and when isn't that pretty?
:iconmaelikki:
is decent, not particularly fond admittedly... but is decent

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O' course it doesn't make sense. Where's the sense in making any?
:iconjessicaduffy:
reminds me of my Tweedle, but white. thanks love, I really enjoy reading your work.

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Jessica Duffy Photography
AHorseADay
"Affection between human beings, however transitory, however qualified, is the closest we can come to Paradise."
:iconladybuttoneyes:
lol thanks idk if i'm happy with it but w/e

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telling detail. fresh detail. the good writers touch it often. the mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. the bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies. ~bradbury 451
:iconladybuttoneyes:
oh only decent? thanks alot....;)

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telling detail. fresh detail. the good writers touch it often. the mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. the bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies. ~bradbury 451
:iconladybuttoneyes:
thanks darling-- did you have a safe flight?

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telling detail. fresh detail. the good writers touch it often. the mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. the bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies. ~bradbury 451
:iconmaelikki:
YES, only decent! like i said i wasn't too too fond of it. just being honest. as in, some of your other stuff is much better...it's not like i told you i was disappointed in your or anything.

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O' course it doesn't make sense. Where's the sense in making any?
:iconjessicaduffy:
yes, I did thanks. long, but safe. and I got to ride today. i missed my baby so much. =D

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Jessica Duffy Photography
AHorseADay
"Affection between human beings, however transitory, however qualified, is the closest we can come to Paradise."
:iconladybuttoneyes:
awww well i'm happy for you. give him a kissy for me

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telling detail. fresh detail. the good writers touch it often. the mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. the bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies. ~bradbury 451

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